Give me, Death!

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Give me a log of wood,
You will see my face bathed in blood!!

Give me a cruel whip,
my torso will bear a tough grip!!

Give me an apical dagger,
my heart will exhibit a hollow bigger!!

Give me a fiery gun,
You will witness in my abdomen none!!

My life vanishes under the hard bricks,
and in the corner my death dangerously lurks!!

The will to live dies ,
and the will to die lives!!

Comments

Jeya Anand said…
ppl...this has nothing to do with myself or my life or my death...
Just a flow of emotions...
June 5, 2007 at 1:17 PM
Sh'shank said…
the image though is quite fantastic!!!
June 5, 2007 at 3:27 PM
Bharti Bedi said…
The will to live dies ,
and the will to die lives!

amazing lines...
June 6, 2007 at 2:11 AM
Andrew The Asshole said…
I'm glad you clarified that this was not your succide note!! I love the ending very poetically done.
June 6, 2007 at 10:48 AM
Anonymous said…
SERIOUSLY!! what i see here in ur blog is amazing...i m wondering how many people i have to meet..so much of talent u have got!!
its really amazing..m just stumped..the flow and the way u migle thots with words..left me spell bounded..
It was really too much to take at first go..I need to spend quality time with ur blog..its too good fantastic..!!!
long live ya..keep writing now u have got one more fan added to ur list!! bravo!!
June 6, 2007 at 7:23 PM
Sharad Mathur said…
glad that u said that its just a poem and ur not serious. otherwise u have frnds here in this blog world who pray for all yr wishes to come true.
LOLS :P

jst joking
sharad
June 7, 2007 at 2:37 PM
Payal said…
Great one yaar. keep up :)
Cheers,
June 7, 2007 at 7:54 PM
Jeya Anand said…
#pricky
is it??

#Island girl
yeah they are...

#Andrew
thanks man...

#sharad
Thanks man...Yeah we are there...Blogosphere...

#payal
Thank u...after a long time...

#dream catcher
Man I m flattered...thank u very muchhhhh...
Fan list??? u should be the first then...:D
June 8, 2007 at 3:20 PM
Sh'shank said…
it sure is...
and plausible images at that...
June 8, 2007 at 4:07 PM
Jeya Anand said…
#pricky
thanks then..:)
June 8, 2007 at 4:21 PM
bornfortheu.s.a said…
"The will to live dies ,
and the will to die lives!!"

beautiful lines. before i read ur comment, i wondered what had gotten into you. good its just a flow of emotions...
June 8, 2007 at 7:25 PM
Jeya Anand said…
#neo
Thanks man...yeah its just a flow...nothing to worry
June 8, 2007 at 8:43 PM
Shruti said…
Simply Awasome..

Take care
June 11, 2007 at 2:46 PM
Jeya Anand said…
#shruti
Thank u...
June 11, 2007 at 3:00 PM
Chronus Ess said…
You need to be handcuffed when you eat chinese, right???

lolz.. Amazing. Truly Amazing. I kinda share your thoughts.. wrote something about suicidal tendencies a little while ago.

But this stuff is in a league of its own!
June 23, 2007 at 3:13 AM
Jeya Anand said…
#acid tongue
hmmm is it?? sure will check it...
June 24, 2007 at 12:32 PM
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