We might as well be Strangers....

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I see in your eyes something malignant.
Why don't you spit it out?
Right on my face,
rather than on my ass.
Prick my heart, if that's your choice,
from the anterior, though!

There's something more worse than hatred,
I realize it now, quite late.
Its your kiss of indifference,
you unleash upon me.
The eye of a stranger,
you stare at me.

Have you lost your past?
Didn't our days last?
where and why have you gone?
Am I incompatible
with the souls of the universe?
Don't ever prove me wrong!

I can move without you.
I have shoulders to cry.
Hands to hold.
Friends to hug.
But remember one thing,
I never said "Goodbye".....

this post is dedicated to my roomie , for having been on my side through hard times, erasing my loneliness of me, though he didn't know whats going inside me!

Comments

Jeya Anand said…
This post has nothing to do with LOVE as you all might waver your minds to graze the fresh green imagination...everything is ok!!:)
August 13, 2007 at 8:04 PM
mystic rose said…
good to know everything is ok. :)

THo
Am I incompatible
with the souls of the universe?
Don't ever prove me wrong!


I couldnt quite get.
August 13, 2007 at 9:23 PM
Keshi said…
good to know everything is ok.

Friendship is a 2-way thing..and sometimes its very hard to convince some friends abt ur deepest thoughts...

Keshi.
August 14, 2007 at 8:43 AM
Jeya Anand said…
Mystic rose...
:)
and that phrase "dont ever prove me wrong that I am incompatible"
Hope nothing is wrong out there...

keshi...
:)
yes it is...u surely would have learnt that recently..from ur friend!
August 14, 2007 at 11:06 AM
Keshi said…
yep that I did! :)

Keshi.
August 14, 2007 at 12:15 PM
Anonymous said…
lovely spirit...but if a friend hurts more often than not and becomes obtrusive, for me its better to say goodbye!
August 14, 2007 at 1:58 PM
Sach1 said…
nice 1!in fact a good dedication!
frnds often meet as strangers...
August 14, 2007 at 2:08 PM
Anonymous said…
so true ..s good...dear leave medical become fultoo author
August 14, 2007 at 7:34 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Keshi...
yes from the lessons of life, we learn a lot...a lot indeed!! NOthing else equates for its wisdom...:)

Kalyan...
Yes thats the same here...But here its not the hurt...something complicated!!

sach...
Thanks man...Yes strangers to friends and then again to the start in no time..:(
August 14, 2007 at 7:46 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Dreamcatcher
Hey man ...where have you been these days ... when are u coming back??? We miss u:(

Hahaha..fultoo author?? No, I don't think so...When I entered this medical course , i never knew I would write...The fact is I discovered it just months back!!AT that time, medicine was my passion...now its slightly deviated...Think I will leave when my exams commence...just may 3 months more here!!:(
then I would be a final yr student..no more fun..we got to deal with lives...of course this itch to write will be there inside...lets c..what happens....:)
August 14, 2007 at 7:48 PM
Pallav said…
scary poem, love poem for your room- mate? dude...thats kinda you know, brokeback mountain;)


N
August 14, 2007 at 8:19 PM
Jeya Anand said…
N...
dude...that isn't a love poem!!Dude...you are funny!!;)I am sure a guy but not a Gay!!;)
August 14, 2007 at 8:22 PM
Ravisekharan (a) Ravi said…
I, for once, got into a wrong notion that you are back again wid another of ur LUV poems. Twaas all fine, wen i read ur PS. Cool again man...

"Prick my heart, if that's your choice,
from the anterior, though!" Dis was admiring! Gr8...
August 14, 2007 at 8:58 PM
Impressionist said…
Wonderful poem bro!
dude like Dreamcatcher said, u better quit medicine and become an author! ;)
heheh !:D

peace & love
Jeevy
August 14, 2007 at 9:45 PM
Ponnarasi Kothandaraman said…
Hm..its always good 2 express that u liked some1's presence in ur life! :) Good! :)
August 14, 2007 at 9:55 PM
Anonymous said…
Wonderfully written. Guess the heartbreak is the flavor of the season.

Mystical blog. Liked it. Blogrolling you.

Do visit mine : http://travelogueworthtwocents.blogspot.com/
August 14, 2007 at 11:03 PM
seraphicgirl1986 said…
sometimes, there are things that just instantly make us feel at home, those that help us realise that we are not as weird as we thought we were.
this is one of those things
and i think the poem is brilliant!
August 14, 2007 at 11:06 PM
annie said…
Emotions are flowing through this post...and you say it's not about love.Huh!!
August 15, 2007 at 12:38 AM
Keshi said…
true Jeya.

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY to ya!

:)
Keshi.
August 15, 2007 at 8:16 AM
annie said…
Ok a wrong post to say this in but still...Happy Independence Day!!
August 15, 2007 at 10:48 AM
What's In A Name ? said…
"I can move without you.
I have shoulders to cry.
Hands to hold.
Friends to hug.
But remember one thing,
I never said "Goodbye"....."....loved these lines!
August 15, 2007 at 11:41 AM
N@nc! said…
friendship is very an important thing in our life... I am happy for you that you have someone that helped you and please keep that friendship :)
August 15, 2007 at 8:46 PM
Phoenix said…
I can move without you.
I have shoulders to cry.
Hands to hold.
Friends to hug.
But remember one thing,
I never said "Goodbye".....

awesome....loved it
August 15, 2007 at 10:54 PM
Anonymous said…
GREAT MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
August 16, 2007 at 6:24 AM
annie said…
Oh i just noticed the text in the pic you displayed. It says it all..so apt!
August 16, 2007 at 11:32 AM
Chronus Ess said…
Stunningly Beautiful.
August 17, 2007 at 2:16 PM
Jeya Anand said…
ravi...
haha..dont make an opinion until you know it fully...:)
Thanks da...

Rajeev...
I thought u were a heartless murderer (in posts,I mean!;))...but you do crack good jokes at times:D..
Thanks bro...:)

ponnarasi...
yes it is!!:)

tugga...
thanks....Yes I feel the same too.heartbreak the flavour of the season...so apt..:)U will be added to my list shortly...
August 17, 2007 at 10:06 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Poison coated elixir...
I just feel the same when I come to urs...:)Thanks..

Annie....
I said its not abt love...but a kind of love...thats friendshi...
Love is an extended veersion of friendship...:)

keshi..
thank u keshi..:)

Annie...to u too...though late...:)

whats in a name...Phoenix...
those were my fav too...:)
August 17, 2007 at 10:16 PM
Jeya Anand said…
soul &body...
yes I am lucky in that...how are u doing??:)

kaylee..
thanks...and how ru ?? take rest!!:)

Annie...
yes...true it is...

Acid tongue...
Thanks man...

Sophia gurl..
Thanks :)
August 17, 2007 at 10:18 PM
Anonymous said…
Funddooo blog!!!
August 22, 2007 at 11:49 PM
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