We might as well be Strangers....


I see in your eyes something malignant.
Why don't you spit it out?
Right on my face,
rather than on my ass.
Prick my heart, if that's your choice,
from the anterior, though!

There's something more worse than hatred,
I realize it now, quite late.
Its your kiss of indifference,
you unleash upon me.
The eye of a stranger,
you stare at me.

Have you lost your past?
Didn't our days last?
where and why have you gone?
Am I incompatible
with the souls of the universe?
Don't ever prove me wrong!

I can move without you.
I have shoulders to cry.
Hands to hold.
Friends to hug.
But remember one thing,
I never said "Goodbye".....

this post is dedicated to my roomie , for having been on my side through hard times, erasing my loneliness of me, though he didn't know whats going inside me!

Comments

Jeya Anand said…
This post has nothing to do with LOVE as you all might waver your minds to graze the fresh green imagination...everything is ok!!:)
mystic rose said…
good to know everything is ok. :)

THo
Am I incompatible
with the souls of the universe?
Don't ever prove me wrong!


I couldnt quite get.
Keshi said…
good to know everything is ok.

Friendship is a 2-way thing..and sometimes its very hard to convince some friends abt ur deepest thoughts...

Keshi.
Jeya Anand said…
Mystic rose...
:)
and that phrase "dont ever prove me wrong that I am incompatible"
Hope nothing is wrong out there...

keshi...
:)
yes it is...u surely would have learnt that recently..from ur friend!
Keshi said…
yep that I did! :)

Keshi.
Anonymous said…
lovely spirit...but if a friend hurts more often than not and becomes obtrusive, for me its better to say goodbye!
Sach1 said…
nice 1!in fact a good dedication!
frnds often meet as strangers...
Anonymous said…
so true ..s good...dear leave medical become fultoo author
Jeya Anand said…
Keshi...
yes from the lessons of life, we learn a lot...a lot indeed!! NOthing else equates for its wisdom...:)

Kalyan...
Yes thats the same here...But here its not the hurt...something complicated!!

sach...
Thanks man...Yes strangers to friends and then again to the start in no time..:(
Jeya Anand said…
Dreamcatcher
Hey man ...where have you been these days ... when are u coming back??? We miss u:(

Hahaha..fultoo author?? No, I don't think so...When I entered this medical course , i never knew I would write...The fact is I discovered it just months back!!AT that time, medicine was my passion...now its slightly deviated...Think I will leave when my exams commence...just may 3 months more here!!:(
then I would be a final yr student..no more fun..we got to deal with lives...of course this itch to write will be there inside...lets c..what happens....:)
Pallav said…
scary poem, love poem for your room- mate? dude...thats kinda you know, brokeback mountain;)


N
Jeya Anand said…
N...
dude...that isn't a love poem!!Dude...you are funny!!;)I am sure a guy but not a Gay!!;)
I, for once, got into a wrong notion that you are back again wid another of ur LUV poems. Twaas all fine, wen i read ur PS. Cool again man...

"Prick my heart, if that's your choice,
from the anterior, though!" Dis was admiring! Gr8...
Impressionist said…
Wonderful poem bro!
dude like Dreamcatcher said, u better quit medicine and become an author! ;)
heheh !:D

peace & love
Jeevy
Hm..its always good 2 express that u liked some1's presence in ur life! :) Good! :)
Anonymous said…
Wonderfully written. Guess the heartbreak is the flavor of the season.

Mystical blog. Liked it. Blogrolling you.

Do visit mine : http://travelogueworthtwocents.blogspot.com/
sometimes, there are things that just instantly make us feel at home, those that help us realise that we are not as weird as we thought we were.
this is one of those things
and i think the poem is brilliant!
annie said…
Emotions are flowing through this post...and you say it's not about love.Huh!!
Keshi said…
true Jeya.

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY to ya!

:)
Keshi.
annie said…
Ok a wrong post to say this in but still...Happy Independence Day!!
"I can move without you.
I have shoulders to cry.
Hands to hold.
Friends to hug.
But remember one thing,
I never said "Goodbye"....."....loved these lines!
N@nc! said…
friendship is very an important thing in our life... I am happy for you that you have someone that helped you and please keep that friendship :)
Phoenix said…
I can move without you.
I have shoulders to cry.
Hands to hold.
Friends to hug.
But remember one thing,
I never said "Goodbye".....

awesome....loved it
Anonymous said…
GREAT MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
annie said…
Oh i just noticed the text in the pic you displayed. It says it all..so apt!
Chronus Ess said…
Stunningly Beautiful.
Jeya Anand said…
ravi...
haha..dont make an opinion until you know it fully...:)
Thanks da...

Rajeev...
I thought u were a heartless murderer (in posts,I mean!;))...but you do crack good jokes at times:D..
Thanks bro...:)

ponnarasi...
yes it is!!:)

tugga...
thanks....Yes I feel the same too.heartbreak the flavour of the season...so apt..:)U will be added to my list shortly...
Jeya Anand said…
Poison coated elixir...
I just feel the same when I come to urs...:)Thanks..

Annie....
I said its not abt love...but a kind of love...thats friendshi...
Love is an extended veersion of friendship...:)

keshi..
thank u keshi..:)

Annie...to u too...though late...:)

whats in a name...Phoenix...
those were my fav too...:)
Jeya Anand said…
soul &body...
yes I am lucky in that...how are u doing??:)

kaylee..
thanks...and how ru ?? take rest!!:)

Annie...
yes...true it is...

Acid tongue...
Thanks man...

Sophia gurl..
Thanks :)
Anonymous said…
Funddooo blog!!!

Dig into the past

The Cruel Conscious

Fly with me...

The Closing Credits...

In our Own selves....

Pricking the Porcupine