Give me, Death!

Give me a log of wood,
You will see my face bathed in blood!!

Give me a cruel whip,
my torso will bear a tough grip!!

Give me an apical dagger,
my heart will exhibit a hollow bigger!!

Give me a fiery gun,
You will witness in my abdomen none!!

My life vanishes under the hard bricks,
and in the corner my death dangerously lurks!!

The will to live dies ,
and the will to die lives!!

Comments

Jeya Anand said…
ppl...this has nothing to do with myself or my life or my death...
Just a flow of emotions...
Sh'shank said…
the image though is quite fantastic!!!
Bharti Bedi said…
The will to live dies ,
and the will to die lives!

amazing lines...
I'm glad you clarified that this was not your succide note!! I love the ending very poetically done.
Anonymous said…
SERIOUSLY!! what i see here in ur blog is amazing...i m wondering how many people i have to meet..so much of talent u have got!!
its really amazing..m just stumped..the flow and the way u migle thots with words..left me spell bounded..
It was really too much to take at first go..I need to spend quality time with ur blog..its too good fantastic..!!!
long live ya..keep writing now u have got one more fan added to ur list!! bravo!!
Sharad Mathur said…
glad that u said that its just a poem and ur not serious. otherwise u have frnds here in this blog world who pray for all yr wishes to come true.
LOLS :P

jst joking
sharad
Payal said…
Great one yaar. keep up :)
Cheers,
Jeya Anand said…
#pricky
is it??

#Island girl
yeah they are...

#Andrew
thanks man...

#sharad
Thanks man...Yeah we are there...Blogosphere...

#payal
Thank u...after a long time...

#dream catcher
Man I m flattered...thank u very muchhhhh...
Fan list??? u should be the first then...:D
Sh'shank said…
it sure is...
and plausible images at that...
Jeya Anand said…
#pricky
thanks then..:)
bornfortheu.s.a said…
"The will to live dies ,
and the will to die lives!!"

beautiful lines. before i read ur comment, i wondered what had gotten into you. good its just a flow of emotions...
Jeya Anand said…
#neo
Thanks man...yeah its just a flow...nothing to worry
Shruti said…
Simply Awasome..

Take care
Jeya Anand said…
#shruti
Thank u...
Chronus Ess said…
You need to be handcuffed when you eat chinese, right???

lolz.. Amazing. Truly Amazing. I kinda share your thoughts.. wrote something about suicidal tendencies a little while ago.

But this stuff is in a league of its own!
Jeya Anand said…
#acid tongue
hmmm is it?? sure will check it...

Dig into the past

The Cruel Conscious

Fly with me...

The Closing Credits...

In our Own selves....

We might as well be Strangers....

Forever is Never...