Inebriated


Hanging by the watch's minute hand,
we were exploring our own land;
Too slowly crawled the clock,
Our brains were fixed in a block;


The state of steadiness measured in terms of pegs,
we flew around with wings pinned to our legs;
Out came the words from the inside,
that crenelated the heart in vitro quite wide;


From dumb to a chatter box, cowardice to courage,
this OH-fluid made our neurones outrage;
Our souls confessed our sins kneeling down,
Yet our exterior dressed in the mask of a clown;


We see an aureole around every face,
bcoz the Inner God emerges out from the surface;
We let ourselves ruled by the uninhibited subconscious,
and slaughter our cruel inhibited conscious;

Comments

Jeya Anand said…
friends sorry!!! if i had harmed ur eyes by that image...:D
Sophiagurl said…
you are very good, i am glad i stumbbled into your blog. will come back for more. =)
surjit singh said…
Deep and beautiful words:
.....Our souls confessed our sins kneeling down,
Yet our exterior dressed in the mask of a clown;...
An excellent post.My best wishes.
Anonymous said…
ha ha...good..good..

We see an aureole around every face,
bcoz the Inner God emerges out from the surface;
We let ourselves ruled by the uninhibited subconscious,
and slaughter our cruel inhibited consciou



u reminded me of all the drunk days...nice one jattz
Jeya Anand said…
#sophiagurl
thanks..and so am i glad to have discovered urs...

#surjit
thanks..and u have a great thought provoking blog..

#dreamcatcher
"reminded me of all the drunk days"
have u given up???

#Nefty
thx
Anonymous said…
yup..over and out....:)
Keshi said…
my eyes r forever twisted now. LOL!

Keshi.
Jeya Anand said…
#quality tale
thx

#dreamcatcher
good for u...

#keshi
sorry then:D
Jeya Anand said…
#quality tale
thx

#dreamcatcher
good for u...

#keshi
sorry then:D
Sharad Mathur said…
i hav seen that pic before.. :)

lols.. a gud one though :P


sharad
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mystic rose said…
ugh! that pic!

hmmm still trying to make sense of the pome though. :)

impressive!
N@nc! said…
ohhh that picture! i thought that I had to buy a new pair of glasses!LOl :D
hey man, u still rocking a !! Gud job!!
Jeya Anand said…
#sharad
hmmm yeah its quite a familiar pic..i know...just added bcoz it would spice up the drunkard...

#neo
wow...thanks buddy very much

#mystic rose
Sorry :D
u might need to have experience it to know the inside of the poem...

#soul&body
hey great to catch u back in my world...

#ravi
machaan..yeah going still..lets see where it ends...when the exams arrives...

#shruti
thx..:)
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well thanks for the info

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