The other dimension..

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Do you know how it feels?
To be left marooned alone..
To be rejected by the one..

Do you know how it feels?
To be darkened by the shadows..
To be brightened by the dark..

Do you know how it feels?
To be not in the list..
To be in the rest..

Finally I understand the feelings of the rest,
& also of those obsessed with the best.

Let the Wind decide to
where, should it blow..

Let the Stream decide through
which way, should it flow..

Let the Gravity decide to
which side, should I fall..

Let the Subconscious rule over me,
in the battles of the best & the rest..

Let Wisdom & Cognition prevail
over intelligence..

Note: Understood best when read with the previous post(its quite small;))

Comments

Sneha P said…
i see u choose the wisdom of the subconscious....
well at least that will inherently what we want...
co else it becomes a battle between brain and heart...
can never decide who wins in those...

hey thanks u visited my blog despite such irregular posts...and i'm sorry i'm not regular here as well..
neway...take care..
cheers!
November 26, 2007 at 9:58 AM
Jeya Anand said…
vitruvian...
battle between the brain and heart...Thats precise!!
:)I am not regular too here...finding time only on sundays...:(
November 26, 2007 at 2:28 PM
Keshi said…
sometimes I follow my heart...wait, its actually all the time.

Keshi.
November 27, 2007 at 5:44 AM
Pallav said…
the light can blind us only in darkness do we learn to really see ;)

Hang in and hang in tight man.

Good poem:)

N
November 28, 2007 at 10:29 AM
Ravisekharan (a) Ravi said…
Good one dude. How r u btw~!!!
December 1, 2007 at 3:14 PM
Sophiagurl said…
hi Jeya how have you been? Lovely post here. Sorry I was late commenting. Hope you're doing great. =)
December 4, 2007 at 9:16 PM
DreamCatcher said…
hi jeya..
how have u been..

subconscious ...hmm i guess it rules its a creeper..isn't it...

but its pretty delusive cognition is hard to achieve..wish it cld take over
December 6, 2007 at 3:50 AM
Impressionist said…
hey bro!
how ru? nice poetry there! :)

peace & love
Jeevy
December 8, 2007 at 11:40 AM
Anonymous said…
Grab the pieces of your existence and move on mate.....nice writeup!!!
December 9, 2007 at 7:58 PM
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