Alone...
“Why don’t you just leave me alone?” he screamed and banged the door shut with a rage that’s killing him cell by cell, tissue by tissue, blood to bones, blood to brain. He is already half dead. A dying dead.
He maintained a dead silence, just as his life had, for minutes. Minutes later, he screamed again “why don’t you just leave me alone?”
He dozed off with some difficulty into a pleasant dream. It didn’t last either. He woke up sensing some fluid on his face. He had difficulty guessing whether it was sweat or his tears.
With the fear clinching his bowels, he came out of the house yelling “is there anybody out there?”, but there was no reply as usual to his posed questions. It was a no moon day leaving the earth alone in its self imposed darkness. There was no shadow following him. He wandered through the streets to find out that he was the only one in the whole town. But the God above had a better view. “He was the only one living, though questionable, dying on the face of the earth”
He thought that GOD finally had seemed to have granted his wish, replied his questions, though not in the desired manner. He still had loads of confusion blurring his immaculate mind. “Had he arrived in a new place or have they left”….but one thing was throbbing his heart…
“Why don’t you just leave me alone?” echoed through his mind restlessly!
p.s. Can you friends see this as a thriller in any angle??Hmmmm..if you do so..let me publish this for Dreamcatcher who asked me to write a thriller some months back before he went off for a hiatus..this is for you brother..:)
Comments
Did u mean that God has satisfied his desires? Or did u mean the other way (ie. Has God made his life even difficult to live?)
And
Is my theme right?
Theme: Don ever get pissed for small things. It's alwayz better to live life as it comes, combating small obstacles infront RATHER than blaming the whole world for complicating things and begging GOD for loneliness and then facing a bad aftermath!!??
Or is it(theme) something else??
u seem to have explored my post a lot...I didnt write based on any theme...but ur theme is partly right...its better to live life as it comes...but everything has got a limit...after which u will never have the patience to live...
And one more request...dont hunt for any meaningful logic inside my blog...u will be disappointed if u do so...:D:D
P.s..I am as confused as you are..as all human...:):)
hahaha..yeah these are doodles of the Insane...But I live by a code...its simple...There's something to be learnt from everything..let it be the most craziest stuff or the least famous one;)
Again..isn't a doodle??:D:D:D
Jeya sadly I agree with that...there r some circumstances in life which makes DEATH better than it!
Nicely written Jeya..great post!
Keshi.
yes..you are right...I will stand by my post..Thanx keshi:)
Sophiagurl..
yeah..its mysterious...even the Auhtor is trying to figure out what he had doodled;)
Really..I mean it...
You are absolutely right!!Kinda unlockable!!
nicely written for a first time! :)
U can do better brotha! :)
peace & love
Jeevy
Good on ya Jeya!
Keshi.
Nice to see your picture too. If I am not wrong, it is recent addition.
Thanks bro..I can...but time seems to be getting hold of me..:(sadly!!
Phoenix..
Glad:D
poison coated elixir..
Thanx:)
kulpreet..
thanx:)yup..I love poetry too;)
and yup.. i added it recently:)
you are right.
Ashu..
ohh..is it?
good then:)
cell by cell, tissue by tissue.. lol this was a bit cheesy for me.. but still..
i am not so sure abt god n all so wont comment more abt the story.. but its been a happy return here for me.. :)
cheers!
a dying dead...
silence more horrible than loudness..
wow!
No body here knows abt GOD..its all their own somethings...Thanks for visiting...
Kaylee...
Thanks...HOw r u now?
Nithya...
Sneaky??
Yes there was nobody...U know its a story..dont ask such questions:D I hardly have answers for them..:D:D
COnsider this way..he was taken away from the world of human...or his wish came true..Dont ask how!!:D:D