Pricking the Porcupine

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I was comfortably numb & dumb,
But this atrocious crust made me succumb!
How pure I was in that womb?
Will my flesh decay in my tomb?

The skin embossed with the spines in line,
I knew , I am the porcupine!
Of bleeding others , involuntarily,
I feel heavy with cardiomegaly!

Touching me , Why do you regret?
Don't you know , its my reflex?
How would you , poor mortal!
Only HE knows the way I feel!

The sun & the moon takes rest,
but my eyes are spared from its zest!
Dwelling under this blanket of gloom,
now , it has become my doom!

I am shutting down my heart!
There's none around me unhurt!
I don't wish to start to again!
I would better end my lively pain!

this post is to all the victims of the porcupine[thats me!];I have hurt almost everyone around me, please forgive me!! There's a hell of things pricking inside the porcupine.Trust me!!

GOD SAVE ALL!!

Comments

Sara said…
Please make an appointment with the nearest shrink.
July 22, 2007 at 2:41 PM
Jeya Anand said…
sara....
I don't wish to...
July 22, 2007 at 2:42 PM
Chronus Ess said…
very correct said. Everyone has the shades of a porcupine in them. NObody can be told how it feels like, but everybody knows their own.
July 22, 2007 at 4:00 PM
Jeya Anand said…
ACid tongue...
Yes ... u r right.... Feel like I have got someone behind me!!:)
July 22, 2007 at 4:03 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Acid tongue...
thanks for ur comment...in spite of ur busy schedule:) highly appreciated!!
July 22, 2007 at 4:08 PM
Keshi said…
cmon Jeya NO ONE IS flawless!

Keshi.
July 23, 2007 at 10:17 AM
Keshi said…
if it makes u feel good, let me say I was a Bitch to some ppl too...I have been and it's those experiences that hv made me a better human being.

Keshi.
July 23, 2007 at 10:18 AM
KAYLEE said…
haha great peice !
July 23, 2007 at 10:37 AM
KAYLEE said…
but i just wish not be one of those so called "victims"
July 23, 2007 at 10:37 AM
KAYLEE said…
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July 23, 2007 at 10:37 AM
Anonymous said…
haven't got pricked yet brotha..let c ;)

the needle of doom..
kaboooomm...

btw ur last few post are zeroing to like a central theme...jst felt so ;)
July 23, 2007 at 2:01 PM
Incrediblyirrational said…
everyone hurts at some point of time. if not for conflicts and fights, there wouldnt be any value for sorries and making ups would it?
July 23, 2007 at 6:59 PM
Jeya Anand said…
keshi...
none is flawless!! Yes thats right!!I guess this beyond!! And that info certainly made me feel better;)

Kaylee...
I guess U won't be on that list!!

Dream catcher..
Yea of the recent past..my posts revolve around a certain theme...U got it!!

Nithya
yes...thats a point worth giving a thought!!:)
July 23, 2007 at 7:43 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Every one...
Thanks for making me feeling good...:) and for standing beside me!!:)

Dreamcatcher...
And I am changing tracks from this gloom ....Watch me bloom in another dimension :D
July 23, 2007 at 8:15 PM
Phoenix said…
Gloomy, yet nice in a way.
Still, ought to wriggle out of self-punishment.
July 24, 2007 at 10:21 AM
Jeya Anand said…
phoenix...
yeah ..sometimes gloom seems to be beauty!! to me!!:)
July 24, 2007 at 12:16 PM
Anonymous said…
Hey Pal,

I am sure no one hurts with an intent. It always is an accident; even if it is a planned one. Doing wrong is an accident, after all.

So take it off your chest. And live again!
Kulpreet
July 26, 2007 at 12:24 PM
Jeya Anand said…
thanks kulpreet!!:)
July 26, 2007 at 12:35 PM
Ekta said…
manier times,cofessions are easy ways to forgive n forget :) very nice one here! :)
July 26, 2007 at 2:22 PM
Jeya Anand said…
purple deepens
I like that...thanks:)
July 26, 2007 at 10:51 PM
Shruti said…
Beautiful expression..

God Bless us all.

Take care
July 27, 2007 at 1:02 PM
Sneha P said…
self immolation at the altar of conscience is it??
very wel written!!
cheers!
July 27, 2007 at 2:54 PM
seraphicgirl1986 said…
confessions of a porpcupine
are very hard to find
theres a porcupine in each us
so earthly and yet so divine!
;)

good going!
July 27, 2007 at 6:13 PM
Jeya Anand said…
shruti...
thanks:)

vitruvian..
yeah it is!!thanks!!:)

Poison Coated elixir..
divine?? now thats a question!!
July 27, 2007 at 7:17 PM
Ravisekharan (a) Ravi said…
The porcupines within us are soft not thorny.

Good going man!!
July 27, 2007 at 8:13 PM
Amandeep Singh said…
Hail ya mate
:)
This piece was damn good....

I was comfortably numb & dumb,
But this atrocious crust made me succumb!
How pure I was in that womb?
Will my flesh decay in my tomb?

Need to be made into a song for sure..whch band would u like to sing it?
July 29, 2007 at 2:46 AM
Princess Banter said…
This is my favorite line: "The skin embossed with the spines in line,
I knew , I am the porcupine!
Of bleeding others , involuntarily,
I feel heavy with cardiomegaly!" Very descriptive and can be felt by almost all the senses!
July 29, 2007 at 8:04 AM
Jeya Anand said…
Ravi..
yet they prick very hard...isnt it??

standby...
thanks man...
and that was a good joke:)

Princess banter...
Thanks for the visit princess!!
July 29, 2007 at 12:05 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Standbymind
Well anyway my favourite would be LINKIN pARK!!love them...:)
August 3, 2007 at 6:27 PM
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