The Black Brigade

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Thud!! Thud!! Thud!!
Marched the black army above,
with the spears aimed below...

This is a war,
& Earth is what they mar...

This is a battle,
& life is what they unsettle...

There blew the siren,
that shiver us to frighten...

Scouting the fragile part,
the recruited arrows depart...

sssssshhhh!! ssssssshhhh!!
They shade the sky in infinite...
The living stare at so polite...

Defenseless the men surrender,
& the victorious defeat they suffer...

In every good there is some bad,
& the bad make them sad...

This between the heaven & the mankind,
leaves a million memories rewind...

Its time to welcome the monsoon,
for its our greatest boon!!



P.S. for those who still toil under the sun raining rays, the brigade is already on the way:)

Comments

Jeya Anand said…
#acid tongue
I am in kind of confusion whether it is the real season or not...pls adjust if its not...:D(just kidding buddy...ur comments are welcome as usual:D)
#everyone
Enjoy the Cool brigade:)
June 27, 2007 at 10:11 PM
Sneha P said…
hey...nice one...
ya..despite the havoc it wrecks some times..everyone without exception welcomes the monsoon...
By the way...U're tagged...
U've got to write 8 random things about urself...and tag 8 people in turn..oka...
check my blog just in case..
cheers..
June 27, 2007 at 11:37 PM
Chronus Ess said…
haha..
you got me there buddy... and its the very correct time.. the change in season.. the brown clouds in the black night sky...

10 on 10 for that fantabulous description...

oh no.. blah i'm going again lolz! sorry!
June 28, 2007 at 12:09 AM
Chronus Ess said…
and yea.. chk out my orkut album for how we welcomed the rain :D
http://www.orkut.com/AlbumZoom.aspx?uid=825922307462359497&pid=6
June 28, 2007 at 12:14 AM
Anonymous said…
ha ha...wooo ...
the flowing wishes
drop by drop
throwing to earth from sky
the clouds a million kisses !!

cool hai !!;)
June 28, 2007 at 5:34 AM
Keshi said…
Good one :)

Keshi.
June 28, 2007 at 9:53 AM
Incrediblyirrational said…
beautiful poem!!! i missed all this a lot. and thank you for the award!!!
June 28, 2007 at 6:57 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Hey vitruvian
thanks and...for the tag....I don't know what to say..

Hey acid tongue
yeah...nailed u even b4 u commented...:D...thanks buddy...

hey dream catcher
that was short n sweet:)

Hey kaylee & keshi
Thanks a lot..

Hellooooo Nithya
Great to catch u back...so settled with ur stuffs?? we missed a lot from ur blog...:)
U r welcome:)
June 28, 2007 at 8:51 PM
Amandeep Singh said…
cool one to welcoome th rains man...
it has knocked ma place tday!
June 29, 2007 at 12:13 AM
N@nc! said…
i liekd very much this part : This is a battle,
& life is what they unsettle... :):):) thats so true....
June 29, 2007 at 6:21 AM
Phoenix said…
victorious defeat it indeed is :)
June 29, 2007 at 1:29 PM
Phoenix said…
you love the monsoons too???

check out mine for the same...older posts though


hey wassup?long time no c???forgotten me kya?
June 29, 2007 at 11:40 PM
Winged Fantasy said…
:-) Nice... The best part is it is not a typical rain poem. It is unique in treatment. Good one. :-)

And thanks for visiting my blog.

Keep in touch! Cheers!
June 30, 2007 at 1:04 PM
Impressionist said…
splendid!
great bro! :)

peace & love
Jeevy
June 30, 2007 at 10:43 PM
Jeya Anand said…
Hey standby mind
yeah man...its reigning my region....

Hey soul& body
yeah indeed...:)

hey phoenix
yeah it is...now who is who....confused...2 phoenix???

Hey Phoenix...
yeah i love them...I love everything that comes from nature...and its a mutual agreement ...isnt it??

Hey meenakshi
thank u....

Hey Rajeev
:)thanks bro
July 1, 2007 at 3:05 PM
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