No More...

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I saw her, on a day I was born, first.
From then, none could quench my thirst.
she was cute,
& I was a brute.
yet it was a match made
at the celestial abode.

It was love at first sight.
I sheltered her with all my might.
I have laughed,cried,lied,spoken
everything to her with my heart open.

I thought I would live with her forever.
But it all ended in no where.
She was more than a friend.
But all good things come to an end.

May be I was holding her too tight.
Now, I've to be an insomniac at night.
Tell me where did you go?
To the high Heaven or the Hell so low?
For I've to ask you,
"Did you ever love me??"

Comments

Jeya Anand said…
ppl...cool...I've not lost anyone ...the thing I lost was my lucky mobile...got drowned in the bucket:(
nothin else....just thought of inking the simple things with love...:)
July 16, 2007 at 7:31 PM
Sara said…
Somehow I knew exactly what this post was about.
THOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Satisfied?
July 16, 2007 at 8:36 PM
Jeya Anand said…
sara....
can u spare my comment box with ur saliva???;)
lets keep that for the messenger;)
July 16, 2007 at 8:42 PM
Sara said…
Might I remind you that you specifically requested that I put this in your comment box.
July 16, 2007 at 9:03 PM
Jeya Anand said…
hey sara...
I didnt request u...i expected it in my IM box...
July 16, 2007 at 9:24 PM
Anonymous said…
hmmm interesting...but when u wee born u first saw ur mom..or nurse...or doc..
so m confused:)
July 16, 2007 at 9:43 PM
Jeya Anand said…
dream catcher ....it was on A day I was born...not on THE day I was born...hope I haven't made any mistake....
July 16, 2007 at 9:48 PM
Chronus Ess said…
u r so dumb! if she could do this, i cant beleive the signs werent visible.
bloody medicos... heart is justa rotary pump for u guys.


haha. got you this time. muhuhahha. revenge of the last time u nailed me before my comment. hahaha

AWE-some!
July 17, 2007 at 12:25 AM
Anonymous said…
ooopppss!! gotcha..sorry made a mistake..apologies sir :)

fantastic..!!!!
July 17, 2007 at 1:19 AM
Impressionist said…
I can completely relate to this poem!
but not the mobile phone!
wonderful!

peace & love
Jeevy
July 17, 2007 at 12:08 PM
Jeya Anand said…
acid tongue...
bro did u read all the comments b4 u commented ?? ;-) better do that...
anyhow what u said were true...I m dumb...and heart is worse than a bloody pump;)hehhe
Now think...did u really satisfy urself with the revenge;)
Thanks man:)
July 17, 2007 at 12:08 PM
Jeya Anand said…
dream catcher...
I never mind those mate:)
thanx:)

rajeev...
thanx bro...:)
actually started off with mobile but actually thru the course got derailed to somewhere only I know;)
July 17, 2007 at 12:11 PM
Chronus Ess said…
i think i'll wait for your next post :(

lolz!
July 17, 2007 at 1:37 PM
Jeya Anand said…
hahaha...will wait for u ....
July 17, 2007 at 1:40 PM
Pallav said…
Thanks god it was a cell and not your girlfriend who drowned...heck i'd write a bigger and sadder poem if something happened to my cell!

Phew,sun the cell for a while it will be ok :)

N
July 17, 2007 at 9:18 PM
Jeya Anand said…
hey N...
yeah it was really kind of GF for me;)
Still bigger??:D

and its dead already!! The doctor informed!!
July 17, 2007 at 10:01 PM
bornfortheu.s.a said…
hey this poem loosely reminds me of events in my life...i'm feeling nostalgic...i love this one...my favourite...
July 17, 2007 at 11:44 PM
Jeya Anand said…
hey Neo...
thanx mate:)
I can sense urs very well!!
July 18, 2007 at 12:21 AM
KAYLEE said…
NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 18, 2007 at 10:06 AM
KAYLEE said…
NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
July 18, 2007 at 10:06 AM
The Lad said…
Sometimes ..it becomes too late to ask...for we realize late..or somethin else..
Nice work...
July 20, 2007 at 2:07 AM
Keshi said…
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July 20, 2007 at 11:43 AM
Keshi said…
Love can be tormenting...I know the feeling so well!

Keshi.
July 20, 2007 at 11:43 AM
Jeya Anand said…
hey Lad...
thanks ...

hey Keshi...
Guess u didnt read all the comments!!:)
Even I do know how love hurts!!:(
July 20, 2007 at 11:56 AM
Jyoti said…
it is really so beautiful!!

Keep it up!

thanks for dropping at my blog!
July 21, 2007 at 9:58 AM
Jeya Anand said…
vitruvian
thanks:)
July 27, 2007 at 7:20 PM
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