Inebriated
Hanging by the watch's minute hand,
we were exploring our own land;
Too slowly crawled the clock,
Our brains were fixed in a block;
The state of steadiness measured in terms of pegs,
we flew around with wings pinned to our legs;
Out came the words from the inside,
that crenelated the heart in vitro quite wide;
From dumb to a chatter box, cowardice to courage,
this OH-fluid made our neurones outrage;
Our souls confessed our sins kneeling down,
Yet our exterior dressed in the mask of a clown;
We see an aureole around every face,
bcoz the Inner God emerges out from the surface;
We let ourselves ruled by the uninhibited subconscious,
and slaughter our cruel inhibited conscious;
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.....Our souls confessed our sins kneeling down,
Yet our exterior dressed in the mask of a clown;...
An excellent post.My best wishes.
We see an aureole around every face,
bcoz the Inner God emerges out from the surface;
We let ourselves ruled by the uninhibited subconscious,
and slaughter our cruel inhibited consciou
u reminded me of all the drunk days...nice one jattz
thanks..and so am i glad to have discovered urs...
#surjit
thanks..and u have a great thought provoking blog..
#dreamcatcher
"reminded me of all the drunk days"
have u given up???
#Nefty
thx
Keshi.
thx
#dreamcatcher
good for u...
#keshi
sorry then:D
thx
#dreamcatcher
good for u...
#keshi
sorry then:D
lols.. a gud one though :P
sharad
hmmm still trying to make sense of the pome though. :)
impressive!
hmmm yeah its quite a familiar pic..i know...just added bcoz it would spice up the drunkard...
#neo
wow...thanks buddy very much
#mystic rose
Sorry :D
u might need to have experience it to know the inside of the poem...
#soul&body
hey great to catch u back in my world...
#ravi
machaan..yeah going still..lets see where it ends...when the exams arrives...
#shruti
thx..:)
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